But do you think you could try to make the same rhythm?example:
fnldkfndglkfdngklfdngkfdlhn red
nfgjldgkdnglfngkdfnhgfjlnkf dead
Jfhdfkldngkdlfgkbjfklnfgvfm scream
fcndsjklofndsgk,dsfndg,dfg dream
What is your mood???
They are really nice fluffy, I appreciate this But do you think you could try to make the same rhythm?
example:
fnldkfndglkfdngklfdngkfdlhn red
nfgjldgkdnglfngkdfnhgfjlnkf dead
Jfhdfkldngkdlfgkbjfklnfgvfm scream
fcndsjklofndsgk,dsfndg,dfg dream
But do you think you could try to make the same rhythm?example:
fnldkfndglkfdngklfdngkfdlhn red
nfgjldgkdnglfngkdfnhgfjlnkf dead
Jfhdfkldngkdlfgkbjfklnfgvfm scream
fcndsjklofndsgk,dsfndg,dfg dream
"Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile,
and finds in your presence that life is worth while.
So when you are lonely, remember it's true
Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
and finds in your presence that life is worth while.
So when you are lonely, remember it's true
Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
thanks, it's just that the rest of the poem is in that rhythm, so it would be strange to suddenly change that. But I do really appreciate your wee verses, they're cute 
"Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile,
and finds in your presence that life is worth while.
So when you are lonely, remember it's true
Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
and finds in your presence that life is worth while.
So when you are lonely, remember it's true
Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
The nights draw close, the air cools downPeople think autumn is sorrow in disguise
That everything's dying, but please give it a try
Cause behind the clouds the sky is always blue
So if you say autumn is sad, then saddest are you.
One year has past since the first leaf fell
And you might think life between that has been like a living hell.
You no longer know those you thought you knew
Because time is changing and you change too.
remember the sun will rise and welcome a new day,
As the wind blows all the leaves away.
You'll learn that darkness and sorrow aren't Autumn's all,
If you let yourself be embraced by the beauty of Fall.
as Autumn spreads it's damp around.
Then Winter in it's frozen spell
will hold us in it's chilly hell.
But don't despair, as time rolls by
there's one thing makes us cheer and sigh.
Despite the long and darker nights
Soon Christmas will be in our sights.
fluffy
no probs Nina...............i tend to change the rhythm in my poems from time to time..........sorry.......lol
Fluffy
Thanks a lot fluffy 
Okay, the poem is finished then! I'm going to write it down to you, so you can see.
Autumn
People think Autumn is sorrow in disguise
That everything's dying, but please give it a try.
Cause behind the clouds the sky is always blue
So if you say Autumn is sad, then saddest are you.
One year has past since the first leaf fell
And you might think life between that has been like a burning hell.
You no longer know those you thought you knew
Because time is changing and you change too.
Remember the sun will rise and welcome a new day,
As the wind blows all the leaves away.
You'll learn that darkness and sorrow aren't Autumn's all,
If you let yourself be embraced by the beauty of Fall.
The nights draw close, the air cool down
As Autumn spreads it's damp around.
Then Winter in it's frozen spell
Will hold us in it's chilly hell.
But don't despair, as time rolls by
There's one thing that makes us cheer and sigh.
Despite the long and darker nights
Soon Christmas will be in our sights.
The Winter draws near and the nights are late
It's a season to love, a season to hate.
A season to love, a season to hate.
Okay, the poem is finished then! I'm going to write it down to you, so you can see.
Autumn
People think Autumn is sorrow in disguise
That everything's dying, but please give it a try.
Cause behind the clouds the sky is always blue
So if you say Autumn is sad, then saddest are you.
One year has past since the first leaf fell
And you might think life between that has been like a burning hell.
You no longer know those you thought you knew
Because time is changing and you change too.
Remember the sun will rise and welcome a new day,
As the wind blows all the leaves away.
You'll learn that darkness and sorrow aren't Autumn's all,
If you let yourself be embraced by the beauty of Fall.
The nights draw close, the air cool down
As Autumn spreads it's damp around.
Then Winter in it's frozen spell
Will hold us in it's chilly hell.
But don't despair, as time rolls by
There's one thing that makes us cheer and sigh.
Despite the long and darker nights
Soon Christmas will be in our sights.
The Winter draws near and the nights are late
It's a season to love, a season to hate.
A season to love, a season to hate.
"Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile,
and finds in your presence that life is worth while.
So when you are lonely, remember it's true
Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
and finds in your presence that life is worth while.
So when you are lonely, remember it's true
Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
That's okay Mia. Maybe another timeI couldn't really think of anything that
seemed to fit with your poem
I must thank you again Laura and fluffy, it is really nice of you to come up with that sort of stuff.
"Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile,
and finds in your presence that life is worth while.
So when you are lonely, remember it's true
Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
and finds in your presence that life is worth while.
So when you are lonely, remember it's true
Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
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